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Sentence The legal files in the first floor storage area are usually not in order, they contain obsolete material that can lead us to produce inaccurate reports.

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Sentence 16:Automatically being a member enrolls you in our apprentice program.

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Sentence 10:Sundays session topic is job interviews.

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Sentence 10:There are many artists currently working in the downtown area willing to participate the Galena Arts Academy were relocated.

Which correction should be made to sentence 10?

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Sentence Impressed was I, when Elena first came to Ryan Industries, with her ability to learn the job quickly.

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When Elena first came to Ryan Industries,

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Sentence Be sure to review these documents, file them away for safekeeping.

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Sentence 1This statement applies not just to those employees in the factory to all of your personnel.

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Sentence 1We have spoken with three design firms have given them our budget.

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Sentence 9:You never needs to leave the office or house!

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Sentence 1Any delivery that is requiring less than three hours to deliver by us is considered by us to be a rush delivery.

Which is the most effective rewrite of sentence 12?

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Sentence 14We wood like to maintain a positive working relationship with Carew Labs.

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Sentence 7:Dealing with your company’s needs we are most flexible.

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Sentence 1Also, an automobile ran in a closed garage emits highly toxic levels.

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Sentence 1It requires contributions of time and resources from those who are genuinely interesting in keeping Everest clean for generations to come.

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Sentence Call us with a request for pickup and delivery, and can instantly contact the Jitney van nearest you.

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Sentence 10:It’s more than just changing fluids and wipers or fixing breaks.

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Sentence 8:That experience will give you just as much exercise, and you will have an opportunity to witness firsthand nature at work.

The most effective revision of sentence 8 would include which of the following group of words?

Which correction should be made to sentence 16?

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Sentence 17:A more specific timetable is available after the meetings.

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Sentences 1 and I use your offices at 14 Wall St.three or four days a week.I use both during office hours and after office hours.

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Sentence Unfortunately, what went up do not always come back down, with the result that Mount Everest has a major trash problem today.

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Sentence 16:Visit our web site at www.quicksilver.com, to learn more about our specialized services and volume discount rates.

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Sentences 8 and 9:Learn to be creative with words.Learn how to make your resume the one that is put on the top of the pile.

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Sentence 7:Many times when I sign in after hours, fails he does to give me a pass slip that I need to use when I leave the building.

Which correction should be made to sentence 7?

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Sentence 1You should use a pointed brush for edging at the ceiling, or a special edging tool.

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Sentence 1Do not simply warm the food, but instead before serving the food, you should make certain the food is heated thoroughly before serving it.

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Sentence 8:I plan to visit Los Angeles in mid-December, I would hope to arrange an interview with you during that time.

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Sentence 1 Regular delivery service is $4.00, for any document or package weighing less than three pounds.

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Sentence 1Do we want to loose our local shoe, clothing, and variety stores?

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Sentence 9:Traffic lights may be synchronized, so if you continued steadily, you may sail through several green lights.

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Where should the following sentence be placed in the document?

Here is how to do it.

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Sentence His sensitive nature was the genius of his work and is exemplified in the emotional canvases that he have painted.

Which correction should be made to sentence 2?

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Sentence I am interested in exploring entry-level opportunities, in the quality control program at Malcolm and Smith, Inc.

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Sentence Are you a handy person with the knowledge to do it yourself but you do not have the tools or equipment?

Which correction should be made to sentence 3?

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